To spot the words and sentences the don't flow well in the essay.
The <em>older violins</em> are more than one object, in this case its cannot be used, only their; <em>each violinist</em> could mean male or female, so it would be possible the use of his or her or their (applied for either),but there is only the latter option. The correct answer is their/their.
<em>The older violins no longer had their original parts, but each violinist played their instrument well.</em>
Answer:
<em>Forgiveness, in a psychological sense, is the intentional and voluntary process by which one who may initially feel victimized, undergoes a change in feelings and attitude regarding a given offense, and overcomes negative emotions such as resentment and vengeance</em>
this got me stumped im sorry
Answer:
Did you ever get in trouble at school? What was a typical school day like for you? How old were you when you started school?
