Um, which summary?
If you're talking about this;
Read the summary of the section of "The Beginnings of the Maasai," where the volcanic eruption and its results are described.
As a result of a volcanic eruption, Enkai and the cattle were thrown into the sky. Enkai wanted to save his cattle. He grew a tree that bridged the sky and the earth. The cattle walked down the tree to Neiterkob. Neiterkob and the Maasai tribe took over caring for the cattle.
Why does the summary need to be revised?
Then the answer is:
The summary lacks transitions that connect ideas
Answer:
Wild birds are green, with yellow heads, and black barring across the wings. Their beaks are quite small, and the base of the bill is usually blue. They are just six or seven inches long, and weigh no more than an ounce. These birds have long, pointed tails and wings.
Edwardian is the term given to the period of British history opening the 20th century when King Edward VII was settled; though it extends from the 1890s until World War I in 1914.
Among its features, the dawn of liberalism, the belief in modern rationality and progress; but it held back on other areas such as arts per say, with the beginning of <em>"Art Deco"</em> in architecture and the end of the <em>"Arts & Crafts"</em> ideals.
Then Artists were influenced by technological advances such as electricity and the automobile. Also the era leaned toward dresses made of lightweight fabrics for a more dynamic lifestyle.
Thereby, the most suitable answer is: <em>"Restrained elegance in art, fashion, and architecture"</em>
Well, if you think about it, if your sentences are super short, you get right to the point and we don't know any of the important details.
Example: The dog died. (short and choppy)
Verses: The suffering K-9 limped along the alley, energy slowly dripping away. He walked in the rain, not noticing the puddles he was trodding through. At length, he reached his almost flooded dog house, where he laid down. His he fell asleep never to wake again, finally at peace.
Make sense? Hope this helped! Sorry for the depressing example ;)
Arthur Miller's Connections to McCarthyism. Arthur Miller had great distaste for McCarthy's investigations in the early 1950s, and he claims to have written The Crucible in 1953 largely as a reaction to this tense political climate.
