Hello!
What you have so far is solid and straight-to-the-point. However, I would adjust it slightly in order to be more shocking to your audience.
Here is my suggestion: "Smog pollution is affecting earth's air quality and is causing the planet's temperature to rise at a rapid rate, which can be detrimental to all of earth's species if it is not controlled soon."
I am not entirely sure what your topic is or what you intend to persuade your audience into believing, so you can change what I have written into what works best for your essay. I would recommend adding an interesting/scary fact into it in order to convince your audience of the importance of your topic.
I hope this helps you! Have a great day!
- Mal
i dont know what the passage is about but this is how you create a theme
To write a theme statement, follow these 3 steps:
Pick the main topic addressed in the story
Pinpoint the author's view on the topic
Format that perspective using a theme statement template
Answer:
It's an adverb
Explanation:
I just took a quiz with this question.
The best way to remember the difference between adverb and adjective is that adverb is the action and adjective is described something
Quite surprised. But there wasn't much emotion between them. But Tom, he is a different story of his emotion to her death
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