Enjambment - the sentences do not finish with the end of the line.
Simile - "like a slackened drum"
Maybe even hyperbole, since it is an exaggeration.
Answer:
Hunter asked, "What is going to happen with this crazy weather?".
Explanation:
I'm assuming you're improving the sentence. commented should be replaced with asked, since he is asking a question. Then you just have to add punctuation to the dialogue.
Answer:
dummy do it yo self ight ok
Explanation:
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Answer:
Mother fetches the fruit from the mango groove
..........behind closed bamboo.
............Rips it paper leather cover during midday recess,
before English class, describes their dance
peach plums cantaloupes before my First World
..............eyes. when the sun blazed on the dust,
She let the mellifluous fluids
.........fall on her assignment books.
Where the mango's where first planted, mother, an infant, hide under gravel swaddled by Lola, my grandmother,
after my mother's aunt and uncle were tied to the trunk
........and stabbed
by the Japanese. Mother and daughter living off
.............fallen mango's, the pit planted in darkness,
.........before I was born.
It was odd because the stranger was in a great rush.