First off, Edgar wrote in a letter to someone that he wanted to be on the Oceanic and not the Titanic. He said it felt incredible, but he wished the Titanic was on the bottom of the ocean which is pretty ironic ngl.
Josey, I write to you now as the glorious Titanic has struck an iceberg. Everyone is screaming and I can’t seem to find anyone who I’ve been in the days prior. Workers just boarded all women and children into lifeboats, and told us that men in first class can come as well if there is room. Unfortunately, that is not me. I told you that the Titanic wasn’t as marvelous as everyone claimed it to be. I hope I make it out of this and find you after. Until then, Josey.
Edgar.
Can I have a bit of clarification? I don't completely understand.
There should be a period after writing it should look like this : " writing. She can"
the sentence also says "through her words" when after "words" , there should also be a period.
Other than the missing periods your sentence seems fine.
You could also use a comma after "writing" instead of a period and make the S in "She" a lower case.
I hope this helps you.
Shakespeare uses alliteration, end rhyme and onomatopoeia in his poem. Alliteration is the repetition of the same sound a the beginning of a group of words. An example of this is the first line: "Full fathom five thy father lies". The /f/ sound is repeated. He also uses end rhyme in his poem to create the rhyme scheme ABABCCDED. Lastly Shakepeare uses the sound device onomatopoeia. An onomatopoeia is word that sounds the same as it's meaning. An example of this is "Ding-Dong."
