Read it and if it sounds like two sentences( two different things,topics) take it apart and/or rewrite it
According to my teacher the different narratives are to make it more generally able to relate to different parts of the population. he is trying to " make the bitter pill of truth about the human condition easier swallow by wrapping it in common figurative language and critisizing his critics." hope that helped but that is all my teacher said.
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This is a sort of tricky question! The first rewrite isn't grammatically correct, so I wouldn't use that one, and the second one still sounds negative, or aggressive. Maybe, 'I haven't enjoyed any of the films they have made this year.' or 'The films they have made this year aren't very likable.'
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Bᴇᴄᴀᴜsᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴏᴘᴇɴ ɪᴛ sᴏ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ sᴏᴜɴᴅ.
