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1) there needs to be "in" at the end
2) "whose" instead of "who"
3) Remove comma
4) change "has" into "was"
5) change "that" into "who"
6) Comma after Rome and after before
7) Move "that" to the end
1) Change the period into a comma and change his name in the second part to he
2) Change the first period into a comma
3) comma instead of a period at the first one
im sorry but i cant find whats wrong with the last 3, theres definetly something wrong with them but i cant put my finger on it :(
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