Don't be intimidated!
Here, I'll go first.
1. <em>I</em><em> went to a comic convention once and I was with my family so I was a little nervous about it since I'm a bit insecure about my interests. Anyways there was a lot of noise and confusion so we just followed the crowd into the building and walked up and down all the little shops and vender carts. it was really noisy so I had trouble talking to my family, so we went upstairs to see the cosplay runway instead. </em>
2<em>.</em><em> </em><em>I</em><em> cluched my bag close to my chest as the crowd inched towards the glass entryway of the building; a building I wasn't sure my family would enjoy yet. We hadn't waited long, but the drive had already work away most of my patience. I tapped my fingers against my arms until my mom, dad, sister and I were each given silver entry cards. As I tugged my hair out from under the card's necklace, the blue tarp was pulled away to reveal the convention. Hundreds of banners hung from the ceiling above large, vibrant signs pinned to the tops of rows and rows of different stands. People rushed around, shopping bags already filled as they shrieked and shouted past each other. I lead my family through the crowds with a wicked grin, abandoning my insecurities as my eyes danced across soft plushes, plastic figures, leather jackets, mystery boxes, and costumes. Cosplays, I corrected my family, as I asked for pictures with them. My sister held her ears, groveling at the building headache we all felt. With ease I navigated the crowd, twisting between the movements with chaotic rhythm, dancing in harmony. </em>
Ok that's 194 words. See, it's just about being more descriptive about the things that matter and skipping over more redundant phrases like "then we went upstairs." Try to really capture the fwel of the moment, using lists and easier sentences to quicken the pace and more punctuation to slow it down. Good luck!
Answer:
Mavis Obeng Tiwaah,
Post Office Box 23176,
Kumasi-Ashanti Region
Ghana.
September 12,2021.
The Minister,
Ashanti Region Municipality,
P. O. Box 1742,
Accra.
Dear sir,
HOW GAlAMSEY HAVE DESTROYED OUR WATER BODIES.
Generally, water bodies serves as a good impact to the individual and the country at large. Water bodies provides electricity, fishes, tourist centers and aods domestic and industrial purposes.
The fact that water bodies serve as a good impact to the individual and the country at large doesn't mean it is without problem. The problem is as follows.
The major problem been faced by water bodies is the GAlAMSEY. Young people with the aim of getting rich early use chemicals,
cynaide and excavators to. dug a big hole so as to get gold . This activity is excessively happening in your constituency. Dear sir, the saddest part is that,they do not cover the hole been dug . So when there's a heavy rainfall, it then washes the soil and then finally settles in our water bodies which makes it harmful to use.
As at now, citizens are complaining due to shortage of water and has completely led to diseases which is killing most of the people.
Dear sir, immediate help and advice should be in access to curb this misfortune. Radio station and other forum should also help in educating the citizens about the consequences and effect of destroying water bodies. Dear sir, I hope this stated views would be taken into consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
<em><u>Mavis.</u></em>
Answer:
opposite meanings
Explanation:
the relationship between the words appetizer and dessert is of having opposite meanings. althought both can be considered part of a full three-part meal, they have opposite order to beserved : an appetizer is a small amount of food eaten before a meal or as the first part of it. a dessert is a sweet food eaten at the end of a meal.
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