Hi, my name is Angel. I recently moved to a town called Ghost Land about six months ago. I also started working at a job called Crabby Patty Shop. Now some strange things have been happen in this town that I don't understand. People have been disappearing left an right. I have asked other people what is going on, but everyone tells me the same thing, they don't want to talk about it. Its now June first, exactly seven months thay I have lived in this town. I woke up this morning, got myself dressed to go to work, and as I walked in to the Crabby Patty Shop it seems that nobody can see me. I don't know whats going on and I'm really scared. So I went to the bathroom to look at myself in the mirror but to my surprise I didn't see myseld. I couldn't believe it I actually woke up invisible. I could still physically pick things up an move them around, pepole just couldn't see me. I then walked outside and stood there in shock. I couldn't believe it, how this possible. Then I realized l, that is what has been happening to all the people that has been going missing in this town. Finally after walking around for hours I heard a girl asked me my name. I stood there in shock for a second, then asked he if she could see me. Well yes she replied, I had finally met someone that was also invisible. So we came up with a plan, since everyone couldn't see us and we could still move things around, we became the invisible super heroes, anytime a crime was taking place we would tackle the person the was committing the crime. Well after a long day of stopping crime all over the town, we decided it was time for bed. The next morning when we got up we realized that we was not invisible anymore. We turned to each other an said well it was fun while it lasted, then Karen left to go home and I moved out of Ghost Land town forever.
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