Answer:
We should tweak a few things to enhance your writing.
Explanation:
As I read your answer, I would give some advice to fix a few things for it to make sense. You wrote Esperanza twice, so replace the extra name with the actual word you meant to write.
Also, the lesson would be (just a little more expanded version to give clarification): Esperanza realized that being rude to others is the same as being rude to her friends, which is why she learned not to do such a thing.
Also, another tip is to read your answer out loud to yourself and figure out any other problems it has.
Let me know if I need to clarify anything! :))
