Answer:
Toby started playing baseball about seven years ago. Then he joined the <em>major </em>league. He wanted to a part of a <em>professional</em> team.
<em>he </em>was <em>going to be</em> drafted by the Milwaukee Brewers. His family believed that his
would help him accomplish
his dream
I'm not quite sure what the word choices were but here's what I got
Kelvin is waiting for James. it is from Kelvin's perspective... he is clearly worried about someone who is going to turn up. James is the only person who is named.
Most likely audience and purpose. It's not like there are timed applications and the way you write it is up to as long as it makes sense.
Well it all depends on what you're writing about. When you write your rough draft think about the feeling it gives when reading it over. Then if it feels right, give it a go. This might not help much but think about how you feel while reading it.
