<span>An introduction is not an angle from which to look at a piece of literature when using hexagonal writing.
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Answer:
i can write a poem
Explanation:
the light from the mirror cast shadows of black but when i stared at those shadows, the shadows stared back
as i walked in the street I heard someone's feet, but as i looked back, where was nothing but black
a second I saw fireflies fly, the next they said goodbye
i felt lonely and scared, then i saw a glowing light, as if it dared me to follow and i followed
The closer i walked, the more quit it got, then i fell down a rathole and there i rot
-Are the words "Transition" and "Conclusion sentence" there because you used it as a guide, you are required to have them, or you need to put one in
-There was a little bit of a lot of word and sentence repeating, I feel like a different word choice could have been used, like synonyms. Like instead of knowledge being used 500 times, awareness or apprehension, understanding, or comprehension could have been used. Just look up synonyms of words you used a bunch of times or for bland (boring) words
- There is some punctuation that could be improved
- Flow is good, with a few choppy parts
- Other than those it is really good
-Let me know if you need anything else, I am more than happy to help
The landmass that is surrounded on all sides by water is called an Island.