<u>Bolding verbs and underlining+bolding vague ones</u>
Anthony is taking Denise for a ride in his new car. He <u>moves</u> fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise <u>says</u>, “Look out!” A truck <u>moves</u> into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony <u>puts</u> his foot on the brake-hard. The car <u>goes</u> first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise says. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and <u>gets</u> control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony <u>goes</u> to Denise.
<u>Rewrite:</u>
Anthony is taking Denise out for a ride in his new car. He drives fast down the highway. Suddenly Denise screams, “Look out!” A truck shifts into their lane, right in front of them. Anthony slams his foot on the brake; hard. The car swerves first to the right, then to the left. “Don’t use the brake!” Denise shouts. Anthony takes his foot off the brake and regains control of the car. “We’re safe,” Anthony says to Denise
Answer:
when the person who killed the old man and the cops where sitting on the planks the disambled body of the old man was under, the person who killed him swore he could hear the thumping of the old man's heart beat.
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<span>I think that Bilbo felt for Gollum. The dwarves and the goblins hated certain beings. Still they all belonged to a group or collective Middle Earth "ethnicity". Gollum was alone:he had nobody to even collictively hate him. Bilbo was tired of the feuds and prejudice. He wanted to purge his own prejudice, he let Gollum live. </span>
When you use imagery in poetry it helps you to visualize it more or better.
Visual effect of poetry.
