Here's some tips about formal language:
1. Usually, it's best to replace abbreviations with their original word. For example, if you wanted to say "it's", you'd say "it is".
2. Use vocabulary words that are more descriptive. This doesn't nessesarily mean more complicated words. For example, if you were to say "Jellyfish can live without causing harm to people", instead of "live", you could say "thrive".
3. This is just a Grammar mistake - "jellyfishes" isn't a word, but "jellyfish" is (just like "fishes" isn't a word).
Hope this helps!
On chapter 2 paragraph 13, Ballister says that quote.
Hi,
I haven't read the text, but I'm assuming it is a Metaphor, comparing the woman to a phantom, WITHOUT using 'like' or 'as'.
~Elisabeth
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had big debt and was broke
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"Anyone exposed to second hand smoke ARE at risk for the..."
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Are should be changes to is I think
