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adoni [48]
3 years ago
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This is for the girl who needed help writing an essay I had to edit it so you could tell what it was saying, my phone wont get a

ny darker. You might have to zoom in a little bit.
:P

English
2 answers:
andre [41]3 years ago
6 0

Answer:

:)

Explanation:

Ira Lisetskai [31]3 years ago
4 0

Answer:

Explanation:WHAT IS A THESIS STATEMENT?

A single sentence that is located at the end of your introduction.

Tells the reader what your opinion is and what paper is going to prove.

Directs your reader to the main pieces of evidence you will explore.

If you want to learn more, check out Purdue’s guide to thesis statements. If you’re ready to get started on crafting the perfect statement, read on.

THESIS STATEMENTS THAT SUCK

ANNOUNCING SOMETHING

I’m going to describe Shakespeare’s love life.

This essay will examine the life of a politician.

What’s so wrong?

These statements provide the reader with an idea about what the essay, dissertation or thesis will discuss, but don’t actually put anything on the line. There’s nothing at stake, no specific issue to be resolved and absolutely nothing to make the reader want to learn more. Many of the essays we come across as part of our student proofreading services contain this basic mistake.

STATING THE OBVIOUS

Shakespeare wrote a lot about love.

Politicians work long hours.

What’s so wrong?

If very few people are actually likely to disagree with the issues you discuss in your essay, what’s the point in wasting your time analyzing them? Your thesis statement needs to make a claim that someone may disagree with. You will then spend your essay arguing why your claim is true. Check out our guide to writing argumentative essays for more deets.

ASKING A QUESTION

Did Shakespeare ever get married?

Why are politicians paid so much?

What’s so wrong?

To write a good thesis, you need to ensure your thesis statement clearly states your position and the purpose of the essay as opposed to simply posing a question. The questions above are weak and do not give your reader any idea about what you’re intending to prove in your paper.

So, now we know what a poor statement looks like, how do you write a fabulous one?

THE ONLY THESIS STATEMENT TEMPLATE YOU WILL EVER NEED

Simply fill in the blanks of this thesis statement template in relation to the topic of your essay and what you intend to prove and you’re done.

By examining <claim one>, <claim two> and <claim three> it is clear that <opinion>.

See it in action:

By examining politicians’ long working hours, depth of responsibility, and the important role they play in the social and economic wellbeing of the country, it is clear that they are not overpaid.

We’re done.

Seriously?

Yep. It really is that easy.

And to make your life even easier, we’ve crammed all this great info into a free printable PDF. Print the poster out and refer to it when you’re in the process of crafting your next thesis statement.

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