Answer:
The crowd picks this up again and with it their suspicions come back with a rush. The murmur becomes a loud chant filling the
air with accusations and demands for action. Two of the men pass Don right up the steps. Goodman flattens himself against
the screen door
What does this stage direction tell the reader about Goodman's viewpoint?
He is nervous the crowd may ask him to join them.
He is worried the crowd may take his generator.
He is frightened the crowd may harm him.
He is concerned the crowd may leave him by himself.
Explanation:
The mistakes:
• “I hear you will go to Paris last month”
Should be- “I heard you went to Paris last month.”
• “I am sure you will.”
Should be- “I’m sure you did.”
• “Will you see Sophia...”
Should be- “Did you see Sophia...”
• “I did heard Ridley...”
Should be- “I did hear Ridley...”
• “I will see our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
Should be- “I saw our old friend Steven Eastwood last week.”
• “He will be doing very well.”
Should be- “He was doing very well.”
• “It was called U.T...
Should be- “It is called U.T...”
• “You must saw it.”
Should be- “You must see it.”
That’s all! The main problem through out this passage was the tenses. The mistakes should be put into past tense.
Hope this helps; have a good day! :)
I had a teacher once tell me allot of times the summary will be in the first sentence and sometimes it may be in the last
