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I would say that how you can tell if your speech is written clear and concise is by making sure your words aren’t misspelled, you use your grammar properly, you don’t go off topic, getting to the point of what you are taking about in a short manner and then going on to explain, make sure your audience can understand the point you are making easily, and chose wise words, get rid “that” and “there is.” Hope this helps..
It is person vs person as it is 2 people
“Quick, Policles, quick!” he cried. “My pony is tethered behind yonder grove. A grey he is, with red trappings. Get you gone as hard as hoof will bear you, for if you are taken you will have no easy death.”
“No easy death! What mean you, Metas? Who is the fellow?”
<span>“Great Jupiter! did you not know? Where have you lived? It is Nero the Emperor! Never would he pardon what you have said about his voice. Quick,
man, quick, or the guards will be at your heels!” - This was the
conversation of Policles and his friend, Metas of Corinth</span>