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Question:
What is the antecedent of the pronoun those?
Sentence: Those are books that need to be returned to the library
Answer:
<u><em>Books</em></u>
Pronouns are used to replace nouns with more general terms that don't describe a specific person or place. The antecedent of a pronoun is the word that the pronoun replaces.
In the case of this sentence, the pronoun <em>those </em>replaces the word <em>books</em>, therefore the antecedent of the pronoun <em>those </em>is <em>books</em>.
During he Pilgrim's Progress, both Christian and his companion are
detained as they pass through Vanity Fair, because of their open disdain about the contents of the area.
I wouldn’t say you’d ask anything at the end. You should always say “It was a pleasure meeting you sir/m’am” or “Thank you for your time”. It’s always good to be polite and show a sign of respect