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Explanation:
In 'I Dwell in Possibility', by Emily Dckinson, the author compares her vocation as poet to prose, through a metaphor of the two as houses.
She feels poetry as an open and ilimeted house, whereas she sees prose as limeted and enclosed.
She also relates poetry to leaving in freedom in nature and prose to be like living in cage.
The answer is B. Some monitoring, such as video surveillance in many businesses, including banks and retail stores, is to be expected as necessary in order to provide security for the businesses.
This sentence is very long and has many excess or filler words that aren't necessary for the reader's understanding of the sentence. The other sentences are more concise and maintain a stronger focus, which is how you would revise this sentence to get rid of the wordiness.
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