The action of Schaffer dismissing the sighting of smoke caused the fire to grow, for he did not bother to alert anyone else. Neither did he try to do something about the fire.
I would try to use attractive descriptive words, such as lush or shining, something to captivate their memory. If I had any good stories to tell about the place I would want to focus on those, since stories make them imagine themselves in that place and situation, possibly making them want to go. Finally, I’d show them any pictures that I took to really capitalize on the beauty or charm of the place I’m talking about.
The rubber duck made a sound as its nature was bouncy.
I hope this helps! :)<span />
