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Answer:
Tehachapi Pass
Explanation: It was early June 1995 when Cheryl Strayed first set foot on the Pacific Crest Trail at Tehachapi Pass (off Highway 58 about 12 miles west of the town of Mojave, Calif.)
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The child is kidnapped and carried into the woods by the Windigo.
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