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The subject was suppose to be "music" but they got no music as a subject(srry for wrong subject, but they don't have music, so, yeah)
a rap i wrote this morning :

my first love wasn't as amazing as it would sound, she made me fall deep in love, but then she buried me under ground. but without her i am feeling pain, so bad that blood is coming outta my vain. i'm feeling' hurt, i'm feeling numb, ig i shoulda knew that she was just fake/cheap- but my love for her was knee deep- it was too steep(to come out of, what can i say? i was in love.) but know in my heart, there's nothing left inside- it's like apart of me just...died. there's nothing left of her, but a memory....gee; i really thought that we-were meant to be. without our love, everything is meaningless, i thought me an her were making progress. the sky is getting dark, and i am feeling faint; i really thought she was a saint. my heart is bleeding but i'm still going; i'm feeling depressed, but on the outside it ain't showing. the darkness is taking over me, and all i can do is let it consume me; i mean; she already, broke me completely. so there's nothing left of me, i am being laid to rest; i've taken off my bullet proof vest. i'm done, it's over- my life's become a bore, since she has left me, i'm gonna be no more.

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it's awesome

it takes a lot of time and thinking to do this

and you have done it

good job

keep risinggg