write it like you are think about it and use a lot of details, hope this helps
The incorrect answer would be that the pronoun “he” should be changed to they”. The pronoun “he” should be changed to “him”
Percy has to escape from Hade's kingdom, Percy came to Hades because Hades had imprisoned Percy's mother, and Hades wanted to keep Percy, and Percy has only three pearls and he also had two friends with him so he decides that he'd leave his mother because if he stayed and his mother go she'd never forgive him.
All the animal's were more smarter when it came to listen to who was right in the farm.
