I like bacon because of its intense flavor. It crunches noisily when I eat it and it tastes like heaven. Bacon is a super food that should be praised by everyone. GO BACON!
shark is to fish as crocodile is to reptile
hope that helps
An independent clause and a dependent clause.
An independent clause is a clause that can stand alone as a sentence (i.e., it expresses a complete thought). However, a dependent clause (or subordinate clause) is one that cannot stand alone as a complete sentence because it does not express a complete thought. Cause it is not a complete thought, it is dependent on being attached to an independent clause to form a sentence. The link between a dependent clause and an independent clause will often be a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun.
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This is really good!!
Explanation:
I really enjoyed your writing and I like how you have set this story up!! The story is extremely intriguing and I almost didn't want to stop reading. I love your descriptive language and it makes the story feel alive. The scenarios feel real and its easy to put yourself in the place of Winter (who is an interesting character) and feel sorry for her and her situation. The one thing I think that could help this even more is maybe some even more descriptive words when describing her running away from Cain (she heard every leaf crunch under her feet and cringed at the thought of him hearing her, she felt the cold breeze and stiff air more than ever alone in that tree and she sat in the short amount of safety that was given to her in that moment, she heard Cains manic laugh echo through the forest, ect.). I feel as though this could make that scene even more better than it already is!! :)
I love this idea and your creativity! Keep writing, this will be amazing!!
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Bᴇᴄᴀᴜsᴇ ʏᴏᴜ ᴏᴘᴇɴ ɪᴛ sᴏ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴛʜᴇ ᴡᴀᴛᴇʀ ᴍᴀᴋᴇ sᴏᴜɴᴅ.
