Answer: 5/10 | I really liked your story! I think you should write more about how the sisters find the spellbook and where the evil jester goes when she is banished. You should also give all the characters formal names. You need to have more of a plot. Instead of saying "Then gradully the sisters secretly continue to send messages to each other and end up finding the location of the spellbook." You could say " When (Name) was banished, (Name2) sent her a message. 'I'm ready to find the spellbook', the message read." You need to add more dialogue. You should also check your spelling as I noticed several mistakes. You should add events leading up to the death of the king and queen. You could also give some information about the backstory of how the General's daughters are asked to come to the castle. I liked your story but overall you need
- Dialogue
- Formal names
-Plot, rising action, falling action
- Backstory
-Setting
-Spellcheck
Explanation:
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she states it will be the first time for women to do a spacewalk and explains that the women will be making history in a month dedicated to celebrating women's contributions.
Explanation:
<span>When
Krakauer visits Franz, he discovers how Franz and McCandless meet. In addition to that Franz also shares, in
detail, the time he spent with McCandless and how we went about helping
McCandless by providing meals for him, listening to him (as friends do),
teaching him the trade of leatherworking, and driving him to San Diego so
McCandless could look for work. It is
from Franz that Krakauer learns of McCandless death, news of which Franz heard
from hitchhikers while Franz was living in a camper at McCandless’s old camp
site.</span>
