All persons, yes all persons
Can you hear me beyond all those commotions
Held as slaves within any State, yes held captive
Must be given the right to freely live.
This freedom, oh for so long has been deprived
Will make such persons finally be revived
Let no one hinder, no one repress
Such people of their liberty possess.
But you, oh people now set free
Must all violence never agree
Let labor be your source of gladness now
Cause your wage you’ll receive, I vow.
As freed men you shall be
Serving fellowmen and country see
Freely you receive so freely give
Freedom that you long to have, enjoy and live.
Answer:
It's straight to the point, which is good but there's a bit of repetition in the phrasing. I revised it for you, I hope it helps.
Explanation:
We decided to establish this business as a way to profit and help the environment, we donate to help the environment by 2% of all sales will be donated to help provide clean drinking water for impoverished families. we decided to set up our business in Mexico because it is super hot we set up shop on the beach because of the heat.
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We've decided to set up a business on a warm sunny beach of Mexico to raise money and help others! 2% of all proceeds will be donated to provide clean drinking water for the less fortunate. We specifically chose this location to help supply those in the scorching heat.
predictive: I think that it will be sunny outside. I think I'm going to ace this test. I believe that my teacher has a pet.
non-predictive: I love playing outside! Math is my favorite subject in school. I am going to a movie this afternoon.
Answer:
NONE of these sentences is written correctly.
Explanation:
corrections:
A. While Jonathan was napping, I finished doing the dishes. (the word 'while')
B. Although the lasagna looked terrible, it tasted wonderful. (the word 'although')
C. Ever since I was a teenager, I have loved going to the theater. (the word 'I')
D. Pepper and I decided it was time to head home. (the word 'decide')
