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The capitalization and punctuation are pretty bad, so here is the correct version:
Layered of homemade Caramel Brownies, Rocky Road ice cream, whipped cream, chocolate also caramel sauce, fresh strawberries, and the most addictive Dark Chocolate Blue Diamond Almonds on the face of the earth. It’s a dessert all piled into one jar that you have to share with people. You can choose different flavors.
It sounds grandiose, but I am <em>not </em>a fan of almonds.
I have not read the passage myself, but here are some helpful tips that can help you to figure it out. An ellipses is a series of three periods (...). Imagery is description that involves the senses, typically sight. Whatever the story makes you visualize is its imagery. Metaphors are figures of speech that contain comparisons, but do not use "like" or "as." Examples of metaphors include "the blanket of snow" or "the curtain of night." A setting is when or where the story takes place. Hope this helps.
She should include <em>is amazed by their ability to build fire </em>as a supporting detail in the remaining bubble.
