The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, a
nd the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous. Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?
“The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old.”
“I remember feeling both terrified and excited.”
“I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up.”
“My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.”
In texting we would (normally) not use proper grammar, but when we’re writing we normally use proper grammar sense someone important is more likely to read it
