Answer: This sentence is punctuated correctly and does not need to be rewritten
Explanation: PLEEEAAASSSE NO HATE COMMENTS IF I GOT THIS WRONG!!!!
Answer:
I would say go for your dreams because even though things could be difficult right now they could get better for you. And if you don't go for your dreams then you might wonder back and regret that you didn't cause you never know how far you can get in life if you don't try to go for it live while you can and who knows you could become a really successful person in the future.
Explanation:
I'm a prisoner on the ground
With no one to stand around
People come and go
And I yell out with a moan
"Please help me
I need to be free"
But no one looks at me
For even one bit
Next thing I know
I start to get hit
I yell out loud
Out into the crowd
"Help me! Please!"
But they back away
And so I say,
"I don't have a disease!"
One moment later
The traitor comes out
And that's when I start to shout
"Traitor! Traitor! You betrayed me! Even when I was in need!"
But he just stayed still
And wouldn't move until
The guards push him away
And that's when he started to sway
Side to side he went
All the while looking content
I couldn't believe my eyes
Everything he told me were lies
I started to rise
To start to go
And wouldn't you know
He held me by the arm
Said, "I don't want to do you any harm."
The last thing I remembered
Was that he got dismembered.
I dont have a drawing but look up prisoner on ground with guards around