The two novels being analyzed are Alice's Adventures in Wonderland written Lewis Carroll and Harry Potter and Sorcerer's Stone by J.K. Rowling. Both novels have the main character traveling through a magical world. The adventure does not begin for either character until they enter that fantasy world. The authors of both books do a great job of using humor and fantasy to capture the readers attention. Each novel has its own special qualities, but one argument is for sure, both books are fantasies.
Secondly, the author of Alice's Adventures in Wonderland uses humor and fantasy to appeal to both children and adults. This novel would appeal to children because of the many fantasy creatures, such as a talking rabbit, a disappearing cat, and soldiers made out of cards. A child pays more attention to a book when the characters are fantasy creatures.
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-structure- introduction, 2-3 body paragraphs, conclusion
-the introduction should introduce a question
-body paragraphs should develop a line of reasoning to answer the question
-the conclusion should summarize and the answer question.
-each paragraph should have a different point
-body paragraphs should be strongest to weakest points
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Drivers who text and driver should definitely be punished because it could hurt someone and themselves and the explanation or statistics would be 385 people died in car crashes linked to texting while driving in 2018. 1.6 Million crashes happen every year because of someone using a phone while driving. About 14% of all fatal crashes involve some sort of cell phone use. Around 390,000 injuries happen yearly from accidents caused by texting & driving. (You could edit that into your own words but this should cover your question)
