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Elena-2011 [213]
3 years ago
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Which revision of the passage best improves its clarity and flow?

English
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Lostsunrise [7]3 years ago
4 1

The answer to this question is option A. All you needed to do was to arrange it in a manner that explains the event that took place first

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