Answer:
animal testing should be illegal
Remove! extraneous means irrelevent
If the options are metaphor, alliteration, allusion, and apostrophe, I believe the answer is metaphor, because the others don't fit.
Alliteration is the repetition of a consonant.
Allusion is reference to something or somebody outside of that literary work.
And apostrophe is the author speaking directly to somebody outside the poem, usually gods or a muse.
The moon experiences many changes throughout the story.
At first, the moon is a shimmering ivory figure.
She then becomes blue, veiny, and wrinkled.
Later, she starts to fade, and become see-through, and her eyes turn indigo.
She ends the story as a sparkly silver pile of embers.
Answer: Yes, it just needs more body!
Explanation: I like the plot line, if you add more excitement to the story via adventures then I’d say you have a nice book going!