A thesis pretty much just explains what your argument is and why. an example would be America was justified in starting a war with icu because __ and ___
Answer:
Passage 1 is more effective because passage 2 relies on personal anecdotes as the main evidence.
Explanation:
The first passage makes more effective evidence because while it relies on data and figures, the second portion relies on personal incidents as its main evidence.
The first passage makes very reasonable and logical reasoning about the importance of video games in the life of juveniles and how there has been a reduction in juvenile offenses while there have been in video game sales.
However, the second passage uses personal encounters with her children to make a discussion which is not relevant at all but rather a request to emotion.
(b) Americanize them, and yes that is a real term.
Do you have a specific civilization you are asking about? Or are we just implying on what we think makes best for a beginning of one?
