I don't see any outstanding flaws with the grammar. So I would say it is correctly written.
Victor assaults his investigations with excitement and, overlooking his public activity and his family far away in Geneva, gains quick ground. Later, Ardently dedicating himself to this work, he ignores everything else; family, companions, studies, and public activity, and becomes progressively pale, desolate, and fixated.
Example:You write yours truly to a person you do not know very well. Example, Yours truly Tom Jackson.
<span>Friar Laurence is presented as a holy man who is trusted and respected by the other characters. </span>
