In sentence 13 (reproduced below), the writer wants to include a piece of relevant evidence that will help convince the reader t
o accept the techniques used by Warren Buffet as credible. Fortunately, there are techniques, like those used by Warren Buffett (born in Omaha, Nebraska, in 1930) when he makes his financial decisions that can minimize the risks of confirmation bias.
Which of the following versions of the underlined portion of sentence 13 best accomplishes this goal?
A) (as it is now)
B
whose ability to tell a story is legendary to
C
one of the most successful investors in history
D
a noted philanthropist
E
whose father was a member of the United States Congress
C. one of the most successful investors in history
Explanation:
The version of the underlined portion of sentence 13 that best accomplishes the goal of convincing the reader to accept the techniques used by Warren Buffet as credible is option C.
This is because, stating that he is one of the most successful inventors in history gives him credibility and authority on the subject.
