Question

Which revision best maintains an academic style throughout?

Answer 1

"In order to meet the demands of the growing elderly population here in Metropolis, the city council must set aside more funding  for senior housing. It is unfair to ignore a large segment of our community" revision best maintains an academic style throughout.

Option: B

Explanation:

A type of language used by scholars to establish their disciplinary intellectual limits and unique areas of interest is understood as "academic writing". Academic writing features also provide a formal style, the use of third-person instead of first-person perspective usually a strong emphasis on the research topic being studied, and detailed choice of words.

For an instance here the big section of metropolis community are the elder citizens, whose resident or home needed to be built or renovated. Thus fund release should be in ample amount to meet their need from council as thus big and important part of society cannot be ignored and it is not ethical too.