The if is fun as the superego is to GUILTY
No change because the rest are basicly repeats
If each paragraph has a clear statement
The balcony scene is sooo romantic in a way that it does influence the audience in a way of telling them about the passionate Romeo and Juliet.
Romeo and Juliet are so passionate, the way that they have just left everything/everyone behind and gone for their love.
It tells the audience that something is impetuous there.