It is supposed to say Bien Y usted? if you sre trying to be formal depending if it is a friend.
also where it says
Jones: ok ven ponlo abajo eschuchar
it is supposed to say ok ven y ponlo abajo para escuchar
besides that it is good.
In spanish how you say this would be “me llamo John.”
1. están
2. llamo
3. va
4. nombre
5. gusto
6. mío
7. haces
8. más lento
9. no hay problema
10. (buenas)t.ardes
11.cuesta
12.estas
13.chao
14senora
15.senonta
I am pretty sure this is right and I hope this helps!