I disagree as if people started not to pay tax then they will get richer than government and this will make country poor but people rich and talking about government then they spends money on daily works if government have not spended money then how could they live on this much developed country
the answer to this question is Fort Mchenry he
The argument is ineffective and can be improved significantly. First of all, he writes the claim in the first person. A formal persuasive essay should be in the form of third person. The author can improve his support by using less opinions and back-up his thesis with facts and evidence and does not take a strong stance on the conclusion clincher. The author also does not efficiently connect his essay. There is no cohesion and his diction is weak. He can improve it by using stronger vocabulary.
Im 100% sure the answer is A. it has the word "like" with comparing the shell to a rock. also its the only sentence comparing two things.
