Answer:
It is important to know what your are writing to whom.
emotions should never be used, use proper spelling and punctuation, use full words, avoid using colloquial words/ expressions, avoid using first and second person pronouns, avoid the use of cleche`s.do not write as you would speak, do not start a sentence with a coordinating junction, avoid using the word get.
Explanation:
A story presented as a play. Actually it's a story, but it can also adapt into a play.
I would have to read the paragraph to give you a proper answer. Could you perhaps take a picture of the paragraph so I may read it?