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This excerpt is an example of iambic pentameter.
An iambic pentameter is a form of a metrical line in which each line contains five unstressed syllables followed by five stressed syllables. They are usually arranged in an alternating pattern.
Shakespeare followed a new tradition of using blank verse in iambic pentameter. He used this form in his writings as it followed the same tone as that of a human’s heartbeat, a horse’ gallop or with the beat of any music. Iambic pentameter added natural speech and the rhythm of life in his verses.
Here is the question
Choose the revision of sentence 8 that is most appropriate for a
persuasive proposal
here are the choices
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food
bank to be sent out to local families who are in need of the service.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food
bank to be sent out to local families who are really needy.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food
bank to be sent out to local families who do not have any money or food.
All of the collections from the food drive will go to the local food
bank to be sent out to local families who can't afford food because they
spend their money unwisely.
The sentence is appropriate as is.