In general you want to be a bit more concise in forming a thesis statement. Usually you should shoot for between 1 and 2 sentences summarizing your argument in a concise way so that it is easily understandable to the reader. I would take what you have written and look for your main argument and try and put that in 1 to 2 sentences.
Hi there... what do you exactly need help with? You’ve provided the example, however you did not say what help is needed.
1. Most hot humid
2.shiny new old historical
3. Summer
4. many clear
5. NONE
Choices? Send those and I can help
<span>Both the poems Bazaars of Hyderabad and Where the Mind Without Fear are mainly introducing the culture of our people. In the Bazaars of Hyderabad Sarojini Naidu said about culture of hyderabad. But in Where the Mind is Without Fear Rabindra Nath Tagore said about whole Indians culture. But in both poems simultaneously give importance to our culture</span>
