This paragraph is super... choppy. It needs to be more fluid. Also, the hook is, well, not present. They have a good start with "Growing flowers is one of my happiest childhood memories." You should build more on this idea of why gardening makes you happy. Through these memories you could share what you gain from gardening, and why you should stop thinking just about the time it takes but also the profit you can earn. To get rid of this "choppiness" you connect through the memories.
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The poem is about one's inner passion and aging, while at one time our hearts are full or wonderment and light (songbird references) as you grow the weight of the world is upon you.
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The sentence " My sister thinks is physic, she says she has ESPN." is a malapropism. This is when a word is confused with another confusing word. ESPN is a sporing network. The correct answer is B.
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