The area of California in which we live is dry and arid, and yet we see grass growing in large areas around homes and office buildings. This practice is not only wasting water but is costing the city too much money—money that could be used for other projects.
You're gonna have to post the story otherwise no one will no the answer
The answer for this question is the bright future
You can revise your claim to make it sound more original or specific by changing the hook to a very different but still effective one, you should have different types of redirect to stand out
