Can you please provide background information to your story? There can be no information created with the paragraph listed. Please let me know when you’ve done that and I’ll be happy to help!
C. include digital sources
d. word choice
a. synthesized
i tried but not sure what your directions or rules were.
The writer should include mainly a summary of what has been covered in the narration, including all the main points and tying them together to see how they relate to each other and making conclusions about the results and observations and activities mentioned in the narrative so that the reader can see what the lessons learned are from the story or process or scientific enquiry carried out.
Answer:It's not much but it's original and I hope it helps :)
Her heart cold as ice her eyes gave a chilling gaze
whoever stood near could feel her fiery hatred like a lit fireplace in winter she was distant but when you did come near you knew her presence was there like winter the freezing feeling always there.
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Voldemort is a cold like winter. Cold in the sense that he has a dark soul. He speaks with an unfriendly tone similar to the feeling you get when it rains in the winter. The darkness starts early as he enters a room like sunsets early in the winter. When he terrorizes the other it’s like snowflakes falling because you never know when he is coming.
It is always cold in the winter and the coldness he shows is similar. Cold meaning at a low temperature which might make you shiver. Voldemort is similar to this because sometimes when he looks at you, you might shiver. A cold, wet, dark winter is the perfect way to describe Voldemort as a person.