I think that a good thesis statement would help and creative hooks to keep the writer hoook and not get bored and keep reading the story. Also add transition words to connect ideas in the creative writting.
The concept of retouching photos is a touchy subject.
Photographers must ask themselves: When does retouching a photo cross over into going too far? Is editing a photo to convince viewers of something false an acceptable practice? Does retouching a photo set unrealistic and false expectations for consumers?
We’ve outlined both sides of the argument – and want you to decide for yourself. What side are you on?
It’s a Lie: The Argument Against Retouching
Programs like Adobe Photoshop allow users to make changes to pictures so they look slightly or completely different from their original appearance. These programs can enhance certain features, diminish or completely erase certain features and even add features.
When magazines, businesses and advertisements retouch photos, a common argument is that this delivers a false message to the consumer. The photo is not truthful and therefore it is lying to the consumer.
The thoughts and feelings of one character
I think the answer is instructor.
Answer: hello your question are based on the excerpt <em>The Alchemist </em>
- He believes Santiago shouldn't have to clean just to eat
- To feed the hungry as commanded by the Koran
- He feels he wont have anything to live for again
- Cleansing of his heart of bad thoughts and
building of a display case outside the shop to attract customers
Explanation:
- The Crystal merchant fed Santiago because he believes he shouldn't have to clean before he can feed him and moreover the Koran commands
- The obligation the Crystal merchant desires to do is to feed the hungry as commanded by the Koran
- He doesn't go because he feels he would lose everything ( i.e. he wont have anything to live for )
- The two new ideas suggested by Santiago are : Cleansing of his heart of bad thoughts and building of a display case outside the shop to attract customers
