Yeah I believe so but you could spice it up a little bit if you want it's up to you.
At the moment when Jane, sister of Elizabeth Bennet, arrived in Netherfield with pneumonia and Elizabeth took care of her, a fact that provoked the admiration of Mr. Darcy that during a dance in the town of Meryton, Bingley suggested that he take her out dance but he declined to consider it beautiful enough. However, after several days, Mr. Darcy's interest grows as does Elizabeth's anger with him over his constant arguments.
He creates a storytelling experience by affecting the type of story
Is there certain options or can I use whatever word?
