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Black_prince [1.1K]
3 years ago
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I need help!! can someone please review my essay and make sure it's good? Thank you!! Tell me ANYTHING I should change!!

English
2 answers:
I am Lyosha [343]3 years ago
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It’s quite nice. Nice work
krok68 [10]3 years ago
5 0

Answer:

Everything looks good but I would put "One reason why" instead of "The first reason why" in the second paragraph first sentence

Explanation:

"One reason why" just sounds more grammatically correct than "The first reason why"

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