Answer:
B
Explanation:
dont listen to them above you :/ they are using this person for points.
 
        
                    
             
        
        
        
Answer:
Barbara is as hungry as a horse.-> Barbara has the hunger of a horse.
The car was a jet when it passed by us.-> The car passed by us so fast, it was as if it were a jet.
Kenny played the violin like an expert.-> Kenny played the violin with expertise.
The music was as soothing as rain.-> The music was so soothing, it reminded me of the rain.
I hope these help you! Have an amazing day!!
 
        
             
        
        
        
A. 
Good writing requires good sentences!
        
             
        
        
        
Answer:
Yes
Explanation:
It all needs to be in your own words, but if you are using another person's work you need to use quotations.
 
        
                    
             
        
        
        
Answer:
Explanation:
Playing in the snow seems to be part of many childhood memories. As it happens, it was also part of mine. When it snows during the winter, it provides an opportunity for children to have fun, from building a snowman to making snow angels and even snowball fights. It truly is unfortunate that some people are adverse to this wonderful pastime and I believe that they should take advantage of this annual occurrence. Memories of playing in the snow really brighten my day and for that, I am really grateful.
<u>You could have listed some examples. You could also use more mature diction and connected some sentences to create a varying length of sentences.</u> 
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