I'd choose "revise the structure of your essay by making the progression more logical."
Out of all the given answers that one makes most sense
Answer:
On the first day of school, Victor stood in line half an hour before he came to a
wobbly card table. He was handed a packet of papers and a computer card on which he listed his
one elective1
, French. He already spoke Spanish and English, but he thought some day he might
travel to France, where it was cool; not like Fresno, where summer days reached 110 degrees in
the shade. There were rivers in France, and huge churches, and fair-skinned people everywhere,
the way there were brown people all around Victor
Answer: Don’t do
I hope this helped :)
Answer:
povertyProcured:gainedMotives:reasonsMetamorphosis:change1In this great American asylum, the poor of Europe have by some meansmet together, and in consequence of various causes; to what purpose, should they ask oneanother, what countrymen they are? Alas, two thirds of them had no country. Can awretch who wanders about, who works and starves, whose life is a continual scene ofsore affliction or pinchingpenury; can that man call England or any other kingdom hiscountry? A country that had no bread for him, whose fieldsprocuredhim no harvest,who met with nothing but the frowns of the rich, the severity of the laws, with jails andpunishments; who owned not a single foot of the extensive surface of this planet? No!Urged by a variety ofmotives, here they came. Everything has tended to regeneratethem; new laws, a new mode of living, a new social system; here they are becomemen: in Europe they were as so many useless plants, wanting vegetative mould, andrefreshing showers; they withered, and were mowed down by want, hunger, ❤
